I can make rhymes so easily,
It just comes to me naturally.
I guess I just have to be in the mood,
Right time, right place, right attitude.
Now I can make rhymes all the live-long day,
But never get to what I have to say.
And what matters now, what it comes too,
Is that I just want to say I love you.
Very cute. Totally made me smile. I love how you contrast how easily it is to make rhymes but you can never rhyme how you feel, and those simple 3 words sums it up.
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Very Cute. I like you contrast how you can really write and rhyme, but you never get what you have to say ore really feel out onto paper and those 3 words sums it up. Very good!
ReplyDelete_meghan
Very cute. Totally made me smile. I love how you contrast how easily it is to make rhymes but you can never rhyme how you feel, and those simple 3 words sums it up.
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i like how this is really short but has a lot to say, reallly good
ReplyDeleteI like how you were rhyming about rhymes. That was pretty smart. I was good, I liked it.
ReplyDeleteZach, this was absolutely adorable. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the simplicity it has, as well as such a deep, emotional message.
ReplyDeleteIt seems so whimsical at first glance, but you can tell it is packed with meaning.